Saturday, October 26, 2013

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Up above in the sky,
Amidst the clouds that sometimes cry,
Like a tiny angel with a sigh,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!

My heart missed a nervous beat,
My mouth let out a very loud bleat,
Yet, I soared very high,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!

Down I came with a smile,
Posed for a shot with some filmi style,
Loved my first ever tandem sky-dive,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.


31 comments:

  1. Contempt??? R u kidding me? This is such a beautiful piece, straight from the heart. Your poems r getting more exquisite day by day. Keep it going Senior :) Loved it. "Amidst the clouds that sometimes cry" Wow! Such a beautiful comparison for the rain bearing clouds.

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    1. Thanks Prajna. :) I don't like my poems much. Glad others do.

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  2. Nice work with the prompt!

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  3. Now that is beautiful.. So glad that you did!!

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  4. Thanks Ankit. Haven't seen you on your blog for quite sometime now.

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  5. Yes. I am again in Pause mode. Actually, I have few things to write on but I am not getting that time in which you write with your heart out loud and when I have some free time I don't feel to write..... So, lets see how soon I scribble something here.

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  6. beautifully rhymed and written :) :)

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    1. Thanks Me-er. :) I can write poems that only rhyme. :(

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  7. Hey...looks like you enjoyed yourself. Well described :)

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    1. Thanks Preethi. :) Yes yes, I did enjoy myself very much. :)

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  8. We can feel how you felt through your words. Beautifully expressed Pooja. :)

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  9. wow!! after my rafting experience, this is what i crave for next!! hopefully i'll do it too one day!! great lines!!

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  10. thats a lovely little poem :)

    nice!

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  11. Such a crisp and clear poem :)
    oh yes yes ! U did it and its wow ! :)

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