Up above in the sky,
Amidst the clouds that sometimes cry,
Like a tiny angel with a sigh,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!
My heart missed a nervous beat,
My mouth let out a very loud bleat,
Yet, I soared very high,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!
Down I came with a smile,
Posed for a shot with some filmi style,
Loved my first ever tandem sky-dive,
Oh yes, I finally did fly!
Contempt??? R u kidding me? This is such a beautiful piece, straight from the heart. Your poems r getting more exquisite day by day. Keep it going Senior :) Loved it. "Amidst the clouds that sometimes cry" Wow! Such a beautiful comparison for the rain bearing clouds.
ReplyDeleteThanks Prajna. :) I don't like my poems much. Glad others do.
DeleteNice work with the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. :)
DeleteWonderful that you did.
ReplyDeleteYayy! :)
DeleteNice take on the prompt , Pooja.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana. :)
DeleteNice!! Beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Akku. :)
DeleteNow that is beautiful.. So glad that you did!!
ReplyDeleteYayy! I am glad too. :)
DeleteThanks Ankit. Haven't seen you on your blog for quite sometime now.
ReplyDeleteThat was a perfect rhyme:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rahulji. :)
DeleteYes. I am again in Pause mode. Actually, I have few things to write on but I am not getting that time in which you write with your heart out loud and when I have some free time I don't feel to write..... So, lets see how soon I scribble something here.
ReplyDeletebeautifully rhymed and written :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Me-er. :) I can write poems that only rhyme. :(
DeleteHey...looks like you enjoyed yourself. Well described :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Preethi. :) Yes yes, I did enjoy myself very much. :)
DeleteWaiting for it. :)
ReplyDeleteWe can feel how you felt through your words. Beautifully expressed Pooja. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru. :)
Deletewow!! after my rafting experience, this is what i crave for next!! hopefully i'll do it too one day!! great lines!!
ReplyDeleteYou will love it. :)
Deletesuper cool :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Joshi. :)
Deletethats a lovely little poem :)
ReplyDeletenice!
Thanks Ankita. :)
DeleteSuch a crisp and clear poem :)
ReplyDeleteoh yes yes ! U did it and its wow ! :)
Thanks Afshan. :)
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